The Fence
One day there was a little girl named Emma. She lived in a house with her parents and big brother Sam. They loved living in their house because they had lived there for six years. Emma likes living there because she has a friend named Chloe and they were friends for 4 years now. Chloe and her family has to move to Switzerland because her dad works there so Emma was very sad.
Beautiful start Linda, I like how you introduced Emma and told us a little bit about her background and her friendship with Chloe. Its a shame you didn't link your story a little more to the idea of the fence. But that's okay a great effort so far, well done!
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