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Thursday 28 August 2014

My Telling Where Poetry

Telling Where

L.I. Elaboration

Jack and Annie started through the cloud forest.  They walked around huge trees draped with moss.  They pushed past tall shrubs and leafy plants.

What does the word shrub mean?
A low woody perennial plant usually having several major branches.


What is elaboration?
Elaboration is the result of going that extra mile, such as when your history teacher asks for five paragraphs on the Fall of Rome.

Choose one of these to elaborate on by telling ‘where’.

At the beach or
At the top of the sky tower

It was a hot summer day at the beach.  There are no clouds in the sky, and the sun is shining brighter than any I’ve seen. I see birds eating people’s food when they aren’t looking, fishes are swimming and jumping.  The water floats over the sand.  Soft pillows hover in the sky.

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